City Views

The city looks different tonight,
but that might
just be because
I’m fucking high
right now,
and the loud
music playing through the speakers
of my girlfriend’s beater
is making
everything shake
a little.
I kind of like it.

29 responses to “City Views”

  1. Urban poetry . I like it

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    1. thank you Ben

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  2. Hang on Lou …. if the city looks different could that be because you are NOT high?

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    1. oh shit, maybe

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    2. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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  3. Looked into the city
    The city looked blue
    Requested your attention
    You looked at it too
    To you it looked quite orange
    I think you missed my point
    If we canโ€™t agree on colours
    We should have another joint

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    1. haha very nice

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  4. Words from a high. Love it.

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    1. glad you liked it. thanks

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  5. Wow! I love it! urbane! Like Ben said.

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    1. thank you very much

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  6. Sound does alter one’s perception. So does weed.

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    1. … in a good way, i think

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    1. thank you

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  7. And why not, life is for living!

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    1. it is

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  8. A perfect urban domestic scene is now pictured in my head ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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    1. very cool. happy you see it

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    1. haha thanks

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      1. Some .. when high..
        jump through windows
        Walked on the ceiling
        Have something crawling on that they donโ€™t recognize…

        You…

        You write these hilarious ๐Ÿ˜‚ poetry..

        I think ๐Ÿค” we have a breakthrough

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      2. wow that’s very kind of you. im happy you enjoy these

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      3. I actually do..
        so real and visual

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  9. Oh boy… This blog is a find! I am betting you’re a fan of Bukowski too..

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    1. ya he’s alright

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    1. thank you

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