The city looks different tonight,
but that might
just be because
I’m fucking high
right now,
and the loud
music playing through the speakers
of my girlfriend’s beater
is making
everything shake
a little.
I kind of like it.
Lou Rasmus is an independent author from Chicago, IL. His works are largely focused on exploring the meaning of life – or lack thereof – while the themes of love, relationships, and self-loathing are also central to many of his stories. His upcoming novel, Primrose Isle, will be his third self-published title. Grapefruit Juice, a collection of bitter poems and short stories, and DEAD RED FISH, his semi-autobiographical debut novel about a young man coming to age on a road trip with his childhood friends, are also available on Amazon. View more posts
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Urban poetry . I like it
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thank you Ben
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Hang on Lou …. if the city looks different could that be because you are NOT high?
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oh shit, maybe
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😂😂😂
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Looked into the city
The city looked blue
Requested your attention
You looked at it too
To you it looked quite orange
I think you missed my point
If we can’t agree on colours
We should have another joint
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haha very nice
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Words from a high. Love it.
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glad you liked it. thanks
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Wow! I love it! urbane! Like Ben said.
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thank you very much
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Sound does alter one’s perception. So does weed.
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… in a good way, i think
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Me too.
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Good one
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thank you
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And why not, life is for living!
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it is
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A perfect urban domestic scene is now pictured in my head 😎
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very cool. happy you see it
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So hilarious
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haha thanks
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Some .. when high..
jump through windows
Walked on the ceiling
Have something crawling on that they don’t recognize…
You…
You write these hilarious 😂 poetry..
I think 🤔 we have a breakthrough
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wow that’s very kind of you. im happy you enjoy these
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I actually do..
so real and visual
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Oh boy… This blog is a find! I am betting you’re a fan of Bukowski too..
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ya he’s alright
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Love
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thank you
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