Faggots

When I tell my friends
that I write poetry,
they usually tell me
that I’m a faggot.
And then I tell them
that they shouldn’t call
people faggots.
I say it’s offensive.
But then they say
that it’s only offensive
to faggots.
And so I let it go.
I turn to my phone.
And I start writing
a poem about how my
friends love sucking
dick.
Those faggots.

38 responses to “Faggots”

  1. Masterful bro… and I mean that! This is dope shit.

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    1. hey thanks man

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    1. haha right

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  2. LMFAO You’re awesome, Lou.

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  3. haha thank you

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  4. Will all that pussy you get…no way you can be a faggot! And if you are? Explains the sensitivity of your writing…just sayin’

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    1. who says whats true and whats not

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      1. and whose business is it?

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      2. right. no one’s

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  5. What really counts is your feeling for people, shines through

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    1. right on

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  6. They might say it doesn’t count if it’s a metaphorical dick. Unless they don’t know what metaphorical is.

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    1. i wouldnt count on them knowing that

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  7. That’s the way! Good poem!

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    1. thank you for reading

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  8. Wow… Fierce !! Ur writing style is a bit different.. n this difference is cool.. πŸ˜…πŸ˜‰βœŒοΈ

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    1. haha thank you

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  9. Hi Lou,

    people sometimes do not want to open the mind.They are slaves of prejudice. Keep writing πŸ™‚

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    1. damn. yup, youre right

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  10. that’s right buddy! kick ’em in their no-no holes

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    1. hahah yup

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  11. Hahaha, hahahaha! That’s hilarious! The writer always gets the last word… πŸ˜‰

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    1. haha ya fuck em all… besides myself of course

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  12. Fuck and faggot are such good words…

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    1. two of my favorites.

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  13. Kindra M. Austin Avatar
    Kindra M. Austin

    I first read this on Instagram. I wanted to come here and tell you how much I like this piece. Makes me smirk like a proper bitch. ❀

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    1. haha im glad you enjoyed it. and thanks for reading (on IG and here), that means a lot

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        Kindra M. Austin

        You’re most welcome. πŸ™‚

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  14. Got me smiling here, I don’t even tell people I write, when they tell my what is my work I just lie and say I’m in construction. That was before some years ago, now I do say I’m a fag that I write with all my instinctive might. I rhyme and intertwine and then I leave them behind.
    So that was weird, but you got the point. They want to fight, no problem not a fag, they want to drink more no problem I’ll over drink them (kind of a problem that one), they want to bullshit no problem you can’t bullshit a bullshiter, but they can do what I can do? Write? No they can’t, can I do what they do for example being in the hot freaking garage making the motorcicly function…..I can, can I be a bartender…..I can, I have worked in all types of jobs in my 35 years of existence but, can they do what I do? No they can’t. And they better not call me a faf on my face, I do have quite a violent temper when they push me too much, working on it though. But, no, I can do what they do and they will never be able to do what I do, as bad as it is, is my art with mostly all my heart.

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    1. damn, thanks for the comment. that was intense.. and also very real. keep writing, man.

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      1. I shall, with better gramar that is…hope

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      2. aw fuck grammar

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    1. haha thank you

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  15. Your writing style is completely offensive and real AF. Love it πŸ™‚

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    1. haha i wouldn’t have it any other way. thanks for reading

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