When I tell my friends
that I write poetry,
they usually tell me
that I’m a faggot.
And then I tell them
that they shouldn’t call
people faggots.
I say it’s offensive.
But then they say
that it’s only offensive
to faggots.
And so I let it go.
I turn to my phone.
And I start writing
a poem about how my
friends love sucking
dick.
Those faggots.
38 responses to “Faggots”
Masterful bro… and I mean that! This is dope shit.
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hey thanks man
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Turnabout is fair play.
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haha right
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LMFAO Youβre awesome, Lou.
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haha thank you
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Will all that pussy you get…no way you can be a faggot! And if you are? Explains the sensitivity of your writing…just sayin’
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who says whats true and whats not
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and whose business is it?
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right. no one’s
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What really counts is your feeling for people, shines through
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right on
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They might say it doesn’t count if it’s a metaphorical dick. Unless they don’t know what metaphorical is.
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i wouldnt count on them knowing that
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He he!
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That’s the way! Good poem!
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thank you for reading
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Wow… Fierce !! Ur writing style is a bit different.. n this difference is cool.. π πβοΈ
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haha thank you
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Hi Lou,
people sometimes do not want to open the mind.They are slaves of prejudice. Keep writing π
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damn. yup, youre right
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that’s right buddy! kick ’em in their no-no holes
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hahah yup
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Hahaha, hahahaha! That’s hilarious! The writer always gets the last word… π
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haha ya fuck em all… besides myself of course
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Fuck and faggot are such good words…
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two of my favorites.
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I first read this on Instagram. I wanted to come here and tell you how much I like this piece. Makes me smirk like a proper bitch. β€
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haha im glad you enjoyed it. and thanks for reading (on IG and here), that means a lot
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You’re most welcome. π
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Got me smiling here, I don’t even tell people I write, when they tell my what is my work I just lie and say I’m in construction. That was before some years ago, now I do say I’m a fag that I write with all my instinctive might. I rhyme and intertwine and then I leave them behind.
So that was weird, but you got the point. They want to fight, no problem not a fag, they want to drink more no problem I’ll over drink them (kind of a problem that one), they want to bullshit no problem you can’t bullshit a bullshiter, but they can do what I can do? Write? No they can’t, can I do what they do for example being in the hot freaking garage making the motorcicly function…..I can, can I be a bartender…..I can, I have worked in all types of jobs in my 35 years of existence but, can they do what I do? No they can’t. And they better not call me a faf on my face, I do have quite a violent temper when they push me too much, working on it though. But, no, I can do what they do and they will never be able to do what I do, as bad as it is, is my art with mostly all my heart.
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damn, thanks for the comment. that was intense.. and also very real. keep writing, man.
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I shall, with better gramar that is…hope
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aw fuck grammar
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Haha, love it! π
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haha thank you
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Your writing style is completely offensive and real AF. Love it π
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haha i wouldn’t have it any other way. thanks for reading
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