LOU RASMUS

big book guy

Lies

You used to tell me
to stay sober.
I used to smoke a blunt
before you would come over.
I always said that
I was just tired.
You never really
believed me.
You just wanted to be
with someone,
and you hated to fight,
so you would let it go.
But we were both unhappy,
even though we said that
we were in love.
Sometimes it’s just
easier to lie.

lou rasmus

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40 responses to “Lies”

  1. Scarpoe Avatar
    Scarpoe

    Yep.

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  2. WaltPage Avatar
    WaltPage

    Truth, young Skywalker

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      hahah thanks Walt

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  3. kittyd8 Avatar
    kittyd8

    That last line was so real. Been there too many times in life.

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      nice to know im not the only one.

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  4. Rachel McKee Avatar
    Rachel McKee

    Been there. Great poem, you really got something here.

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      thanks Rachel. means a lot

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  5. righteousbruin9 Avatar
    righteousbruin9

    There are all too many who live such lies. My late wife started to think of herself as one of them, but I fixed that and made her love a true thing.

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      thats a very nice story

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  6. George F. Avatar
    George F.

    It IS easier to lie. Problem is, once you start, you can’t stop. Focus on being true to yourself and if a woman doesn’t like it, she can walk. That’s the only way until you meet someone who loves you for you. (Good luck with that. All women see men as something to be changed or fixed. LOL!)

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      haha very true George

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    2. C M Smile Avatar
      C M Smile

      Not all women😉

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  7. a la VIVA by mkc Avatar
    a la VIVA by mkc

    I read this several times. Will read it again too. Love it.

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      very nice of you. happy you like it

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  8. HotBottoms Avatar
    HotBottoms

    very nice.

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      thank you

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  9. rishhuu Avatar
    rishhuu

    Great man!

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      thank you very much

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  10. dale.beck1@hotmail.com Avatar
    dale.beck1@hotmail.com

    never worth living a lie, trust me, i did it for 30 years

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      shit. i believe it. out of it now at least.

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  11. ortensia Avatar
    ortensia

    We have all been there and one thing I can tell …..run before it’s too late …… company for the sake of company is never a good idea and that musk you have to constantly wear will fry your skin sooner or later,and your soul😎

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      haha “that musk” … but i think you’re right. this was a story about an old relationship. done now. think that’s a good thing

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      1. ortensia Avatar
        ortensia

        It is indeed and ,yes lol as much as I love musk as a scent for men I meant mask😂😂😂I’ll never win this war with typo😳🤣

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      2. lou rasmus Avatar
        lou rasmus

        hahah oh well. i knew what you meant

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      3. ortensia Avatar
        ortensia

        Damn I really need to check typo and,may be ,start wearing my glasses on my nose rather on my head🤣or may be not……I can just keep mistyping😜

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      4. lou rasmus Avatar
        lou rasmus

        fuck it, whatever is comfortable

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      5. ortensia Avatar
        ortensia

        👍🏻😎

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  12. Orvillewrong Avatar
    Orvillewrong

    A love of convenience!

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      it was.. and not a good one

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  13. cariboucrossingsak Avatar
    cariboucrossingsak

    god don’t I know it

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      i don’t think we’re the only ones who’ve been there. sadly

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      1. cariboucrossingsak Avatar
        cariboucrossingsak

        Tragically beautiful lies, Lou.

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  14. lou rasmus Avatar
    lou rasmus

    thank you

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  15. hati03nisa Avatar
    hati03nisa

    I really adore this one!!!!! Superb!!!!

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      glad you do. thank you

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  16. Jonathan Caswell Avatar
    Jonathan Caswell

    Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    YUP–IS IT EVER! GREAT VERSE! CLEAR AND WELL-EXPRESSED POINT!

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      thank you for sharing this

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  17. Jay Kaushal Avatar
    Jay Kaushal

    Awesome.. As always. Also.. Love really is quite complicated isn’t it?

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      thank you … and yes it is. always a mess

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  18. Susi Bocks Avatar
    Susi Bocks

    Still together?

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