Sounds Like Me

I haven’t touched these words in so long that they got covered in dust. And now I feel rusty as I try to readjust them. I can’t remember how where they were supposed to go. The order seems messed up. Or the purpose is missing. Or maybe they were just shitty words to begin with. That seems possible. I was probably just drunk when I spat them out. Drunk or high. Writing them just to write them. Writing them just to get the thoughts out of me. I must have been too fucked up to say them out loud. I probably was. Because this actually seems like something a drunk man would say to me at the end of the night when the party is winding down but the music is still playing loud and I can only make out fragments of what he says. A drunk man who can’t figure out how to write. It sounds like me.

47 responses to “Sounds Like Me”

  1. Yeah, but it’s funny anyway and you did write it down…

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  2. Lou? Is this you? If your words make no sense, you’re probably just tense, your terse and rhyme out of whack, but try if you must, to get back on that bus, it’s the finest way to shake off the rust.

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    1. haha i guess i missed the bus this morning

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  3. You might be drunk but you very well know how to write๐Ÿ˜

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    1. very nice. thank you

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  4. I sound like that quite often

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    1. haha good. so it’s not just me

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    1. thank you. happy you like it

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  5. #vulnerability…. โค๏ธโค๏ธ

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    1. im always vulnerable

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    1. great minds think the same.. or some cliche like that

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  6. Good things happen sometimes

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  7. โ€œ I canโ€™t remember how where they were supposed to go. โ€œ I cannot remember how AND where the were supposed to go. I found this wee typo. It may actually not even be a typo but an error left there purposely on your part. Perhaps to make your narration muddleheaded. ๐Ÿ™‚ great writing style and very enthralling!

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    1. damn. just a typo. but it does seem fitting haha. thank you for reading

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  8. I said it somewhere else, so you know what I think.

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    1. i do. and thank you for that

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    1. i don’t really know

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      1. I put a comment on Instagram, I think. I’m a lazy bitch.

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        1. haha its ok. im lazy too. i saw it

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      2. Beats the hell outta me too, lol

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        1. fuck it, i tried.. sorta haha

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  9. HEY… This sounds like me too! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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    1. haha glad im not the only one

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      1. LMAO you’re not alone ๐Ÿ˜‚

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  10. This. Is. So. Relatable

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    1. nice to know other people get it

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      1. We do. Raw, with a sharp wit. Some of your lines are amusing and devastating at the same time.

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        1. happy you like them

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  11. Truth comes from the mouths of babes and drunks. Maybe you and your babe, drunk together, could put forth some kind of gospel.

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    1. ill call it scientology

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  12. “A drunk man who canโ€™t figure out how to write.” Right. Then why am I always picking up what you’re putting down?

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    1. shit. i think you caught me

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      1. Keep it up! I look forward to your work every week. ๐Ÿ™‚

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        1. im happy you do… and i will

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