She has zits
on her tits
and she thinks that
makes her ugly.
She thinks to herself,
no one will love me.
But I love her.
Because even though
she has zits
on her tits
her lips are sweet,
and she drinks
with me,
and when she
reads my poetry
she smiles
at the words
like she smiles
when I kiss her.
The other shit
doesn’t matter.
Lou Rasmus is an independent author from Chicago, IL. His works are largely focused on exploring the meaning of life – or lack thereof – while the themes of love, relationships, and self-loathing are also central to many of his stories. His upcoming novel, Primrose Isle, will be his third self-published title. Grapefruit Juice, a collection of bitter poems and short stories, and DEAD RED FISH, his semi-autobiographical debut novel about a young man coming to age on a road trip with his childhood friends, are also available on Amazon. View more posts
Tit zit
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zit tit
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I fucking love this!
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haha cool im glad you do. thanks
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needle in a haystack?
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something like that, i think
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Allane x
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very cool. thanks Allane
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I wanna pop em…
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very tempting
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Zits on tits? That’s the pits! You’re cracking me up here.
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haha good. happy you liked it
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Awe! Your fucking way with words….
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that’s very nice. thank you
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Just as it should be !
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You know, this is among the most romantic poems I’ve read lately. I mean it.
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thank you. i think i might be a romantic at heart. under all the other shit
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That’s what I suspect too.
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I totally agree!
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I knew you would!
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So do I.
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It might not suppose to but this made me giggle…….
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haha no that’s ok. i think real love is kind of funny
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But… But..what if… I mean… Oh Fuck it.
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haha yes. fuck it
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Lol, 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
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Zits on tits are totally good with me.
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fuck yeah
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I mean it doesn’t detract from the amazing nature of breasts.
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very true
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