Zits

She has zits
on her tits
and she thinks that
makes her ugly.
She thinks to herself,
no one will love me.
But I love her.
Because even though
she has zits
on her tits
her lips are sweet,
and she drinks
with me,
and when she
reads my poetry
she smiles
at the words
like she smiles
when I kiss her.
The other shit
doesn’t matter.

30 responses to “Zits”

  1. I fucking love this!

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    1. haha cool im glad you do. thanks

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  2. needle in a haystack?

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    1. something like that, i think

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  3. https://wordpress.com/post/allanesinclair.wordpress.com/12208

    I’ve nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award. Your participation isn’t compulsory but I just wanted you to know how much I appreciate your presence and your talents.

    Allane x

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    1. very cool. thanks Allane

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  4. Zits on tits? That’s the pits! You’re cracking me up here.

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    1. haha good. happy you liked it

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  5. Awe! Your fucking way with words….

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    1. that’s very nice. thank you

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  6. Just as it should be !

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  7. You know, this is among the most romantic poems I’ve read lately. I mean it.

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    1. thank you. i think i might be a romantic at heart. under all the other shit

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      1. That’s what I suspect too.

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    2. I totally agree!

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  8. It might not suppose to but this made me giggle…….

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    1. haha no that’s ok. i think real love is kind of funny

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  9. But… But..what if… I mean… Oh Fuck it.

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  10. Lol, ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ

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  11. Zits on tits are totally good with me.

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      1. I mean it doesnโ€™t detract from the amazing nature of breasts.

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