Likes

She fishes for likes
like I fish for the words
to describe
what it’s like to feel
unliked by the people
who act like they like me
in real life,
even though they don’t like
my poems on Instagram.
Only she’s better at
fishing than I am.
And I guess it makes sense.
I’d rather look at her ass
than look at my words
too.
It just seems like a step back
for humanity.

37 responses to “Likes”

  1. How about a poem about her ass? That seems handful. ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. haha you know that’s next

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    2. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚sorry my twisted mind made me chuckle to see โ€œassโ€and โ€œhandfulโ€in the same sentence๐Ÿ’๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ

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  2. Lou, i love your poems so much, it hurts lol

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    1. damn. thank you very much. im happy you like them

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    1. it is. glad you liked it

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  3. Lou u are supposed to like her ass more then ur words or u would be a boring egocentric ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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    1. right on. her ass wins every time

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      1. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ˜Ž

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  4. I actually find this rather profoundly spoken. Lol must be the day

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    1. not sure if its my most profound work, but im glad you see it that way. thanks for the comment

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      1. Iโ€™ve no doubt itโ€™s not, like I mentioned Iโ€™m having a day and the last line sort of pointe the direction my mind was leaning ๐Ÿ™‚

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        1. haha well im glad you see where im coming from

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  5. we are all media whores, preening in the flashlight… i like her ass too.

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    1. hahah well it is a nice ass

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      1. nothing so perfect as a peachy ass

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  6. Seems to me her ass has you hooked. So she’s fishing for more than likes.

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    1. whoa. very true. have to watch out

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      1. I’d like to tap that too…alas.

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  7. I like what dronstad said. She might even appreciate an ode to her derriere.

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    1. alright well i guess i really need to write that next

      Like

  8. I think you have become my new favorite blogger.

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    1. wow that is very nice. thank you

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