I want to write something sappy
for her,
but I’m afraid that it will scare
her away.
Unless maybe
she thinks that it’s romantic
and charming
and sweet
and funny
and beautiful.
Probably not though.
I want to write something sappy
for her,
but I’m afraid that it will scare
her away.
Unless maybe
she thinks that it’s romantic
and charming
and sweet
and funny
and beautiful.
Probably not though.
Lou Rasmus is an independent author from Chicago, IL. His works are largely focused on exploring the meaning of life – or lack thereof – while the themes of love, relationships, and self-loathing are also central to many of his stories. His upcoming novel, Primrose Isle, will be his third self-published title. Grapefruit Juice, a collection of bitter poems and short stories, and DEAD RED FISH, his semi-autobiographical debut novel about a young man coming to age on a road trip with his childhood friends, are also available on Amazon. View more posts
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This was a pleasure to read
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happy you enjoyed it
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honesty works lou. and you are always honest
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thanks Dale.
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Lovely piece… It does show a sappy side and a romantic one at that.
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this is as emotional as i can get. and thank you
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Just don’t mention her diseased vagina and you’re good to go.
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haha nothing wrong with a diseased vagina. doesn’t mean she’s a bad girl. i dont judge
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This is just a little sappy and kinda sweet. 🙂
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im ok with that. but i don’t want to get more emotional than that and go soft haha. thanks for reading
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It’s a thin line. 🙂
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have to be careful
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You’re in a sentimental mood today, Lou.
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i know. i feel weird
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I bet. Reading Jane Austin already?
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haha can’t say I have been
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Now or never.
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ok… now
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You’ll hate her but if you insist…
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ive read her before.. i really don’t hate it
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No kidding?!
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That sound sappy enough to make her happy….😉😍
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hopefully
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If she doesn’t…. feck it…she doesn’t deserve u and u can still move to California 🤩
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i like where your head’s at
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Thank you ,I will tell it ….it’s usually all over the place but sometimes it has great ideas and advices 😂😂😂
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In that case you only have one option. Tell her you want to make her cum like she’s never cum before. Loving, truthful and not sappy.
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that should work
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I totally understand. It just never seems good enough. But I bet yours would be. I mean clearly You have a way with words. Lol I’ll be waiting…. (instert creepy stare here)
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haha thank you.. i think?
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I once wrote something sappy and illicit to a woman, then stayed away for a long time, thinking I shouldn’t have done it. When I did see her again, she gave a secret smile. If you have feelings for someone, you gotta tell them. It feels better to know it’s out there.
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right on. thanks
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lou, sappy only works if you are dating a tree.
Is she tall?
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hahaha damn, that got me
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Don’t believe them Lou. Honesty is NOT the best policy. Make everything up, then you can take comfort in knowing that you weren’t really serious when everything goes horribly wrong. The sappier the better in my experience.
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right on. i like that approach
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Go write her. Be brave enough to tell her your true feelings anf intentions. 😊
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You’ve heard most of it. My thing was to put a ring on her finger, on V-Day. Somehow, I don’t see that happening this year, in your case.
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how’d that go
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It lasted 29 years. Then, she died.
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jesus. sorry.
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I 100 percent relate to this
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happy to know someone does
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