LOU RASMUS

big book guy

City Views

The city looks different tonight,
but that might
just be because
I’m fucking high
right now,
and the loud
music playing through the speakers
of my girlfriend’s beater
is making
everything shake
a little.
I kind of like it.

lou rasmus

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29 responses to “City Views”

  1. Ben Aqiba Avatar
    Ben Aqiba

    Urban poetry . I like it

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      thank you Ben

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  2. Richmond Road Avatar
    Richmond Road

    Hang on Lou …. if the city looks different could that be because you are NOT high?

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      oh shit, maybe

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    2. ortensia Avatar
      ortensia

      😂😂😂

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  3. Richmond Road Avatar
    Richmond Road

    Looked into the city
    The city looked blue
    Requested your attention
    You looked at it too
    To you it looked quite orange
    I think you missed my point
    If we can’t agree on colours
    We should have another joint

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      haha very nice

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  4. WaltPage Avatar
    WaltPage

    Words from a high. Love it.

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      glad you liked it. thanks

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  5. Little Mountain Avatar
    Little Mountain

    Wow! I love it! urbane! Like Ben said.

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      thank you very much

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  6. righteousbruin9 Avatar
    righteousbruin9

    Sound does alter one’s perception. So does weed.

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      … in a good way, i think

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  7. Silent Hour Avatar
    Silent Hour

    Me too.

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  8. thelonelyauthorblog Avatar
    thelonelyauthorblog

    Good one

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      thank you

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  9. Orvillewrong Avatar
    Orvillewrong

    And why not, life is for living!

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      it is

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  10. ortensia Avatar
    ortensia

    A perfect urban domestic scene is now pictured in my head 😎

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      very cool. happy you see it

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  11. exoticnita54 Avatar
    exoticnita54

    So hilarious

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      haha thanks

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      1. exoticnita54 Avatar
        exoticnita54

        Some .. when high..
        jump through windows
        Walked on the ceiling
        Have something crawling on that they don’t recognize…

        You…

        You write these hilarious 😂 poetry..

        I think 🤔 we have a breakthrough

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      2. lou rasmus Avatar
        lou rasmus

        wow that’s very kind of you. im happy you enjoy these

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      3. exoticnita54 Avatar
        exoticnita54

        I actually do..
        so real and visual

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  12. Jay Kaushal Avatar
    Jay Kaushal

    Oh boy… This blog is a find! I am betting you’re a fan of Bukowski too..

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      ya he’s alright

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  13. Souldiergirl Avatar
    Souldiergirl

    Love

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      thank you

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