LOU RASMUS

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Snowing

It’s snowing sideways.
Heavy wind.
I’m high as shit
and I think that
I’m going to hit
a patch of ice and
lose control of the car,
and crash,
and die.
I see myself lying
over my steering wheel,
head through the
windshield.
Bloody.
Broken.
Fuck,
I think,
I wish it was
sunny and warm
again.

lou rasmus

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31 responses to “Snowing”

  1. grumpygorman Avatar
    grumpygorman

    Snowing sideways.

    Love it.

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      thanks Anthony

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  2. George F. Avatar
    George F.

    We’re all here on borrowed time anyway. It’s what you fill the void with that counts. Driving high? That’s thrilling anyway…

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      keeps me entertained enough, ha

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  3. Eli Kyoko Avatar
    Eli Kyoko

    Now this is what you call WICKED 😉💖

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      haha thank you very much

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  4. Christopher Bland Avatar
    Christopher Bland

    What that us you throughin in up on your picture hommie?

    Strong words on display to! 👍

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      haha, a picture i found of some drunk night. i think i was trying to dance … and thanks

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      1. Christopher Bland Avatar
        Christopher Bland

        Well you no what they say…. lol! Naw man I was just fucking wit ya… I got famly on the south side of the chi….

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      2. lou rasmus Avatar
        lou rasmus

        haha right on

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      3. Christopher Bland Avatar
        Christopher Bland

        My man!✋

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      4. Christopher Bland Avatar
        Christopher Bland

        Hi fives

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      5. lou rasmus Avatar
        lou rasmus

        thanks for reading, Christopher

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      6. Christopher Bland Avatar
        Christopher Bland

        Naw… don’t think me just yet man! I gots to read some more of ya work… well all of it and I will…

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      7. lou rasmus Avatar
        lou rasmus

        and so i need to read all of yours. i like what ive seen so far

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      8. Christopher Bland Avatar
        Christopher Bland

        Well if you read all might shit! When you finish… cars will be flying and we will be living on Mars old as fuck still drinking six packs… lol

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      9. lou rasmus Avatar
        lou rasmus

        hahah challenge accepted

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      10. Christopher Bland Avatar
        Christopher Bland

        👍👍👍

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      11. Christopher Bland Avatar
        Christopher Bland

        But… have at it

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  5. Christopher Bland Avatar
    Christopher Bland

    What is that I meant

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  6. Everheart Avatar
    Everheart

    I see what the comment another blogger made in the immediacy of your poetry. Macabre, not the reality I want to create for me, but I can appreciate difference as for certain, that is Love’s response and I love you.

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      thank you

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  7. WaltPage Avatar
    WaltPage

    I wish that too

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  8. Forrest Pasky Avatar
    Forrest Pasky

    Don’t die Lou. I need something good to read on here.
    Get a Kryptonite Cappuccino at Starbucks in case Superman tries to attack you with his snow plow.
    In other words, everything is going to be alright.

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  9. righteousbruin9 Avatar
    righteousbruin9

    I picture you getting thrown through the windshield, and then getting up and dancing like a dervish, on the hood of your car.

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      hahah wicked… i like where your head’s at. if only i could do that in real life.

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  10. Elle Nguyen Avatar
    Elle Nguyen

    I always enjoy seeing the progression of each poem you write, each line is short and to the point, and it all leads ultimately to one overarching concept. Love it! Thanks for sharing 🙂

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      thanks Elle, that means a lot.

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  11. floatinggold Avatar
    floatinggold

    Well, you know what? Maybe stop writing as you drive? You’ll have more control over the wheel then. LOL

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      ah. but it keeps things exciting

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      1. floatinggold Avatar
        floatinggold

        Now, it definitely does THAT!

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