LOU RASMUS

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Snowing

It’s snowing sideways.
Heavy wind.
I’m high as shit
and I think that
I’m going to hit
a patch of ice and
lose control of the car,
and crash,
and die.
I see myself lying
over my steering wheel,
head through the
windshield.
Bloody.
Broken.
Fuck,
I think,
I wish it was
sunny and warm
again.

lou rasmus

January 19, 2018

Poems

#Crash, #death, #life, #poem, #poetry, #Thoughts, #Writer, driving, snow, winter

31 responses to “Snowing”

grumpygorman

January 19, 2018 at 4:09 pm

Snowing sideways.

Love it.

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 19, 2018 at 4:09 pm
  
  thanks Anthony
  
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George F.

January 19, 2018 at 4:11 pm

We’re all here on borrowed time anyway. It’s what you fill the void with that counts. Driving high? That’s thrilling anyway…

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 19, 2018 at 5:16 pm
  
  keeps me entertained enough, ha
  
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Eli Kyoko

January 19, 2018 at 4:20 pm

Now this is what you call WICKED 😉💖

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 19, 2018 at 5:17 pm
  
  haha thank you very much
  
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Christopher Bland

January 19, 2018 at 4:23 pm

What that us you throughin in up on your picture hommie?

Strong words on display to! 👍

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 19, 2018 at 5:19 pm
  
  haha, a picture i found of some drunk night. i think i was trying to dance … and thanks
  
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  1. Christopher Bland
    
    January 19, 2018 at 5:21 pm
    
    Well you no what they say…. lol! Naw man I was just fucking wit ya… I got famly on the south side of the chi….
    
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  2. lou rasmus
    
    January 19, 2018 at 5:23 pm
    
    haha right on
    
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  3. Christopher Bland
    
    January 19, 2018 at 5:38 pm
    
    My man!✋
    
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  4. Christopher Bland
    
    January 19, 2018 at 5:38 pm
    
    Hi fives
    
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  5. lou rasmus
    
    January 19, 2018 at 5:44 pm
    
    thanks for reading, Christopher
    
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  6. Christopher Bland
    
    January 19, 2018 at 6:06 pm
    
    Naw… don’t think me just yet man! I gots to read some more of ya work… well all of it and I will…
    
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  7. lou rasmus
    
    January 19, 2018 at 6:49 pm
    
    and so i need to read all of yours. i like what ive seen so far
    
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  8. Christopher Bland
    
    January 19, 2018 at 6:54 pm
    
    Well if you read all might shit! When you finish… cars will be flying and we will be living on Mars old as fuck still drinking six packs… lol
    
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  9. lou rasmus
    
    January 19, 2018 at 6:59 pm
    
    hahah challenge accepted
    
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  10. Christopher Bland
    
    January 19, 2018 at 7:28 pm
    
    👍👍👍
    
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  11. Christopher Bland
    
    January 19, 2018 at 6:54 pm
    
    But… have at it
    
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Christopher Bland

January 19, 2018 at 4:24 pm

What is that I meant

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Everheart

January 19, 2018 at 4:35 pm

I see what the comment another blogger made in the immediacy of your poetry. Macabre, not the reality I want to create for me, but I can appreciate difference as for certain, that is Love’s response and I love you.

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 19, 2018 at 5:20 pm
  
  thank you
  
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WaltPage

January 20, 2018 at 5:31 am

I wish that too

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Forrest Pasky

January 20, 2018 at 2:28 pm

Don’t die Lou. I need something good to read on here.
Get a Kryptonite Cappuccino at Starbucks in case Superman tries to attack you with his snow plow.
In other words, everything is going to be alright.

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righteousbruin9

January 20, 2018 at 9:28 pm

I picture you getting thrown through the windshield, and then getting up and dancing like a dervish, on the hood of your car.

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 20, 2018 at 9:52 pm
  
  hahah wicked… i like where your head’s at. if only i could do that in real life.
  
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Elle Nguyen

January 21, 2018 at 8:38 pm

I always enjoy seeing the progression of each poem you write, each line is short and to the point, and it all leads ultimately to one overarching concept. Love it! Thanks for sharing 🙂

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 21, 2018 at 8:46 pm
  
  thanks Elle, that means a lot.
  
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floatinggold

January 23, 2018 at 9:38 pm

Well, you know what? Maybe stop writing as you drive? You’ll have more control over the wheel then. LOL

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 23, 2018 at 9:44 pm
  
  ah. but it keeps things exciting
  
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  1. floatinggold
    
    January 23, 2018 at 9:45 pm
    
    Now, it definitely does THAT!
    
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