LOU RASMUS

big book guy

Disguise

These
red eyes
are nothing
but a way
to hide
from everything
that I don’t want
to see
clearly.
Nothing but
a diguise,
like a mask
or some shit.
And I like it
that way.

lou rasmus

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38 responses to “Disguise”

  1. Daman Avatar
    Daman

    These red eyes holds so much of emotions, pain, love and anxiety ❤️ very well penned

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      i think you said it better than me. thanks for the comment

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  2. Daman Avatar
    Daman

    Aww. That’s so kind of you to appreciate my words. But yours truly made the start of my day ❤️

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      very nice. thank you.

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  3. adarianqueen Avatar
    adarianqueen

    Red eyes, very interesting. Like red eyes forming rose tinted vision to show you only what you want to see, your version of the world.

    I loved your concept of red eyes.
    Thank you for sharing.

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      basically. i dont want to see the other shit. glad you enjoyed it.

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  4. Bruce Goodman Avatar
    Bruce Goodman

    I agree… but it would be awful to be blind… (And now I’m going to shut up).

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      i don’t want to be blind, just selective with what i look at seriously. thanks for the comment Bruce

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  5. ortensia Avatar
    ortensia

    If only two red piece of tape would be enough not to see…….but even if ,would it like it that way?
    Fantastic piece Lou,so much in it😍

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      it might be better than no tape.. and thank you

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      1. ortensia Avatar
        ortensia

        Whatever it works right?!😉have a good day
        P.s
        I’m getting my kindle back this weekend so I will eventually be able to look at your published story.😊

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      2. lou rasmus Avatar
        lou rasmus

        you have a good day too. and cool.. i hope you enjoy it

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  6. WaltPage Avatar
    WaltPage

    I enjoy your outlook on life.

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      i enjoy your comments

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      1. WaltPage Avatar
        WaltPage

        Cool. Do people your age still say that? lol

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      2. lou rasmus Avatar
        lou rasmus

        haha ya cool is still cool

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      3. WaltPage Avatar
        WaltPage

        Cool!

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  7. Arooba Avatar
    Arooba

    👍

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      👍👍

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  8. SalGallaher Avatar
    SalGallaher

    Red tape… is that better than rose coloured glasses? 😁
    Love your raw honesty

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      similar… but thank you

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  9. pvcann Avatar
    pvcann

    I see what you did there 🙂 love the intention of the poem/visual

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      thank you

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  10. Forrest Pasky Avatar
    Forrest Pasky

    Ah, a dose of non-bullsh*t. Refreshing.
    When I was growing up we had an albino rabbit with red eyes.
    You’re not that rabbit in “disguise” are you Lou?
    Have a great day.

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      haha i don’t know about being a rabbit, Forrest, but a lot of people do think that im albino

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  11. George F. Avatar
    George F.

    There’s a ying to your yang. Your red eyes prevent others from seeing you as you truly are. I’m fairly confident there’s a sensitive dude behind this drunk degenerate, but I’m not sure. And what would it mean to me anyway?

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      im not sure either. sometimes i think there’s more to me. other times i dont give a fuck about anything. i wonder which side will prevail

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      1. George F. Avatar
        George F.

        As long as your single you can “not give a fuck.” When a woman finally worms her way into your life, that’ll change my degenerate friend, that’ll change. Until then, live carefree for the rest of us.

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      2. lou rasmus Avatar
        lou rasmus

        damn. true. ill try my best

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  12. charliecountryboy Avatar
    charliecountryboy

    I think it makes you look cross 😜

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      then it’s a job accomplished

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  13. lovesdeepwaters Avatar
    lovesdeepwaters

    This reminds me so much of my husband. I’m sure he could relate

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      sounds like a guy i could trust

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  14. righteousbruin9 Avatar
    righteousbruin9

    Red contact lenses have been mistaken for demonhood. ;P

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      good. then i hit the mark

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  15. allysoally Avatar
    allysoally

    You’re a deep thinker behind your disguise.
    My son was a deep thinker and he passed last December.
    I miss his raw honesty, you have that quality! 🙂

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    1. lou rasmus Avatar
      lou rasmus

      very sorry to hear that.

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      1. allysoally Avatar
        allysoally

        Thank you.

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