LOU RASMUS

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Disguise

These
red eyes
are nothing
but a way
to hide
from everything
that I don’t want
to see
clearly.
Nothing but
a diguise,
like a mask
or some shit.
And I like it
that way.

lou rasmus

January 17, 2018

Poems

#High, #life, #poem, #poetry, #Stoner, #Thoughts, #Weed, #Writer

38 responses to “Disguise”

Daman

January 17, 2018 at 6:32 am

These red eyes holds so much of emotions, pain, love and anxiety ❤️ very well penned

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 17, 2018 at 6:35 am
  
  i think you said it better than me. thanks for the comment
  
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Daman

January 17, 2018 at 6:37 am

Aww. That’s so kind of you to appreciate my words. But yours truly made the start of my day ❤️

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 17, 2018 at 6:45 am
  
  very nice. thank you.
  
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adarianqueen

January 17, 2018 at 6:54 am

Red eyes, very interesting. Like red eyes forming rose tinted vision to show you only what you want to see, your version of the world.

I loved your concept of red eyes.
Thank you for sharing.

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 17, 2018 at 7:50 am
  
  basically. i dont want to see the other shit. glad you enjoyed it.
  
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Bruce Goodman

January 17, 2018 at 7:22 am

I agree… but it would be awful to be blind… (And now I’m going to shut up).

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 17, 2018 at 7:52 am
  
  i don’t want to be blind, just selective with what i look at seriously. thanks for the comment Bruce
  
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ortensia

January 17, 2018 at 7:46 am

If only two red piece of tape would be enough not to see…….but even if ,would it like it that way?
Fantastic piece Lou,so much in it😍

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 17, 2018 at 7:53 am
  
  it might be better than no tape.. and thank you
  
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  1. ortensia
    
    January 17, 2018 at 8:04 am
    
    Whatever it works right?!😉have a good day
    P.s
    I’m getting my kindle back this weekend so I will eventually be able to look at your published story.😊
    
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    1. lou rasmus
      
      January 17, 2018 at 2:18 pm
      
      you have a good day too. and cool.. i hope you enjoy it
      
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WaltPage

January 17, 2018 at 8:28 am

I enjoy your outlook on life.

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 17, 2018 at 2:19 pm
  
  i enjoy your comments
  
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  1. WaltPage
    
    January 17, 2018 at 4:02 pm
    
    Cool. Do people your age still say that? lol
    
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    1. lou rasmus
      
      January 17, 2018 at 4:23 pm
      
      haha ya cool is still cool
      
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      1. WaltPage
        
        January 17, 2018 at 9:10 pm
        
        Cool!
        
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Arooba

January 17, 2018 at 9:30 am

👍

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 17, 2018 at 2:19 pm
  
  👍👍
  
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SalGallaher

January 17, 2018 at 9:47 am

Red tape… is that better than rose coloured glasses? 😁
Love your raw honesty

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 17, 2018 at 2:20 pm
  
  similar… but thank you
  
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pvcann

January 17, 2018 at 2:46 pm

I see what you did there 🙂 love the intention of the poem/visual

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 17, 2018 at 3:13 pm
  
  thank you
  
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Forrest Pasky

January 17, 2018 at 2:55 pm

Ah, a dose of non-bullsh*t. Refreshing.
When I was growing up we had an albino rabbit with red eyes.
You’re not that rabbit in “disguise” are you Lou?
Have a great day.

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 17, 2018 at 3:16 pm
  
  haha i don’t know about being a rabbit, Forrest, but a lot of people do think that im albino
  
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George F.

January 17, 2018 at 3:22 pm

There’s a ying to your yang. Your red eyes prevent others from seeing you as you truly are. I’m fairly confident there’s a sensitive dude behind this drunk degenerate, but I’m not sure. And what would it mean to me anyway?

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 17, 2018 at 3:31 pm
  
  im not sure either. sometimes i think there’s more to me. other times i dont give a fuck about anything. i wonder which side will prevail
  
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  1. George F.
    
    January 17, 2018 at 3:47 pm
    
    As long as your single you can “not give a fuck.” When a woman finally worms her way into your life, that’ll change my degenerate friend, that’ll change. Until then, live carefree for the rest of us.
    
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    1. lou rasmus
      
      January 17, 2018 at 3:54 pm
      
      damn. true. ill try my best
      
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charliecountryboy

January 17, 2018 at 6:11 pm

I think it makes you look cross 😜

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 17, 2018 at 7:57 pm
  
  then it’s a job accomplished
  
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lovesdeepwaters

January 17, 2018 at 9:59 pm

This reminds me so much of my husband. I’m sure he could relate

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 18, 2018 at 6:26 am
  
  sounds like a guy i could trust
  
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righteousbruin9

January 20, 2018 at 2:32 am

Red contact lenses have been mistaken for demonhood. ;P

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 20, 2018 at 3:50 am
  
  good. then i hit the mark
  
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allysoally

January 29, 2018 at 12:17 pm

You’re a deep thinker behind your disguise.
My son was a deep thinker and he passed last December.
I miss his raw honesty, you have that quality! 🙂

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 29, 2018 at 3:26 pm
  
  very sorry to hear that.
  
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  1. allysoally
    
    January 29, 2018 at 7:33 pm
    
    Thank you.
    
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