Neon signs
light up
like
they do in
my dreams.
People fight
at the bar
like animals
proving
their dominance.
She’s there,
dancing
and laughing
and making
it worth it
to be awake
and not
watching
Animal Planet.
I kind of
like this
bar.
Lou Rasmus is an independent author from Chicago, IL. His works are largely focused on exploring the meaning of life – or lack thereof – while the themes of love, relationships, and self-loathing are also central to many of his stories. His upcoming novel, Primrose Isle, will be his third self-published title. Grapefruit Juice, a collection of bitter poems and short stories, and DEAD RED FISH, his semi-autobiographical debut novel about a young man coming to age on a road trip with his childhood friends, are also available on Amazon. View more posts
Rocking bar… Animal Planet… I must admit, it’s a close tie! 😛
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close, yes, but the bar wins tonight
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I hear you… You’ll never get that alligator’s phone number, even if you pull your best pick up line 😉
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hey i can try
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Yolo! 😉
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That is the bar
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If you can get them to put animal planet on at the bar = perfection.
In my drinking days the bar tenders would never question when I would ask them to change the channel. Beer and shark week….. bliss. haha
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hahah dammit why didn’t I ask!
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So sweet. I like that harmony you speak of.
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thank you
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This brought me back. Lol Thank you!
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happy you enjoyed it. thanks for reading
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Any bar that serves alcohol…I like.
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right on George.. we have similar taste
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This was great and funny
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haha thank you, im glad you liked it
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Hey😀 I enjoyed this read a lot
Thank you for sharing
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haha im glad you enjoyed it.. thanks for reading
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😊
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Hey😀 I enjoyed this read a lot
Thank you for sharing
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A place with Heat beats a cold dark room, any day.
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i guess its alright.. ill drink anywhere though
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I just found out the Discovery channel headquarters is moving here to Knoxville, i don’t even give a fuck about sharks but but i’m stoked for some reason.
good poem
it’s like a tiny glimpse into a slipstream of a mind
makes me want to watch that Johnny Mnemonic movie where they slice people up with future laser chord watch like thingy’s.
it makes me happy and content in this shit of a life, nice job.
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damn. thanks for the nice comment. not seen the movie but maybe ill check it out.
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Don’t you wish more people could enjoy the simple pleasures of life?
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its really too bad that they dont.. thanks for reading
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Funny ,real,harmonic, a celebration of life s small pleasures🍻
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