Dog Park

I went to the
dog park
with my
cat in my coat,
beause I wanted
her to see
that the world
is bigger
than the
bare walls
of my home,
and that there’s
more to life
than eating the
shitty food
in her
food bowl.
Maybe I needed
to see it
too.

29 responses to “Dog Park”

    1. thank you dale

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  1. Great way to cause so exciting commotion to laugh about later when you’re stoned! LOL! The cat could scratch your face badly once she hears those dogs parking and tries to escape…then the fun would be just begin!

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    1. i liked the idea of dogs parking better…. haha but thanks for the comment George

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  2. There are cat ladies, and then there are writers. I can’t recall any writer I know without a cat. Odd.

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    1. i think youre right… in some ways we’re all similar like that

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    1. thank you

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  3. I like this one really…..it’s open to so many interpretations .
    Apologies I didn’t read your published story yet but I have problems with my kindle but I’ll do it😊

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    1. thank you.. and no problem. if you get the chance, let me know what you think

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      1. Of course I will I’m actually curious to read it😀

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  4. You are getting better and better, in my opinion. Love seeing what you’ll write next. x

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    1. very kind. thank you. and thanks for reblogging, too

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      1. Welcome!

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  5. Reblogged this on SPO_OKY and commented:
    Writing the truth is my favourite kind of writing. Lou writes the truth.

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  6. I want to see dogs brought to a cat park- equal time, Dude!

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    1. haha that would be good

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  7. For whatever reason, I immediately imagined you walking briskly, hunched over, smuggling a cat down the street while wearing only a trench coat and boots.
    You could walk up to strangers and flash them your kitty! Hahah jk

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    1. haha yup that’s basically it.. just a cat and a coat

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      1. Depending on the timidity of the kitty, sounds dangerous…
        😂

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  8. Your poetry is raw, with attitude. I admire your creative guts. I loved this one – conjures up so many possibilities.
    p.s. I am a writer without a cat – so it happens.

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  9. thank you very much. that is very kind. and tell the cat hello for me haha

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  10. haha well we made it back

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  11. I sense the need for freedom in all your poetry. Like the wings are scared to open up and let you fly.

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    1. i dont think youre wrong.. just not sure if im there yet

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  12. Love this 😊
    So many ways to see life as we choose to step out of our comfort zone..

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    1. ya its just hard to get out of our comfort zone in the first place

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