My body is crude
but her body is fire,
and every time we
lie together we
ignite like a
spark.
Pulsing.
Beating.
Breathing each other’s
hearts.
I think that’s love.

big book guy
My body is crude
but her body is fire,
and every time we
lie together we
ignite like a
spark.
Pulsing.
Beating.
Breathing each other’s
hearts.
I think that’s love.
45 responses to “Crude and Fire”
I think this is a great piece
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thanks ken
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You’re welcome
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Without a doubt! 😃💛
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I think you are right!
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Rawness at its very best, and nothing different to what l have come to expect from your marvellous outlook on life displayed beautifully through your writing – l have nominated you for the Liebster award my friend – https://aguycalledbloke.wordpress.com/2018/01/02/leibster-award-nomination/
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very cool. thank you very much
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Absolute pleasure – keep it up 🙂
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Short term love soon to be doused by the cooling liquid of a few spilt beers…trust me on that…
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damn. maybe. fuck
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LOL! Don’t stop being you for any ol’ pssy!
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haha can’t stop won’t stop, George.. you know that
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It’s beautiful.
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thank you
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You do art as well?… man of many talents…
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haha i like to doodle… but thanks
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This is wonderful, Lou.
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thank you very much
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Yo, Lou. I nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award. Have fun dude. 😀 https://dronstadblog.wordpress.com/2018/01/03/mystery-blogger-award-2
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whoa. cool. thank you, man
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No problem. 😀 My pleasure. Stay cool. 😀
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ill try my best
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yeah!!!!! its definitely LOVE
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seems like it could be
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So simple, yet makes me feel so extensively pleasant inside. Wow.
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thats intense. glad you enjoyed it. thank you for reading
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You are most welcome, Lou!
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This is intense I love it 😍
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thank you very much
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Wow, pretty awesome!
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thank you
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Fire burns away crude. Look out for Pure Lou!
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lets not get ahead of ourselves.. i dont think im at Purity yet
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I see your invitation and love it. I also see Lou’s interest in impurity and god I love that too! I am just so excited about the future as I love everyone’s choices. I must admit I have no clue what is purity. I know what fear is. I know what love is. I know that I know nothing, and dying to everything about life I am reborn as a loving human being. I know this too. I am reminded of Spirits invitation to me to give away all my possessions save 1 bag. That was a way of dying to my life. On that occasion I felt pure. On other occasions too, after ceremony, meditation, sleeping, and exercising too. What is purity? What is virtue? Virtue leads to purity as the fire burns away the attachments. So much is certain. Love is the fire. Right Action is the fire. I know nothing. I live as if I were dead. And then desire is the next object of discovery. I desire nothing, only to serve The Wind-Spirit.
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wow.. you make for fun conversation. thank you for reading and commenting. interesting
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My comment to Lou was tongue in cheek. I know Satan will be chucking snowballs, before Lou goes all sweetness and light.
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hahaha
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“breathing each other’s hearts” sounds like love 🙂
This is a great piece!
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maybe it is… thank you
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Uuuu,I love this one!
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thank you very much
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Or something like it….😏
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i guess you can never be sure
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“Breathing each other’s
hearts.
I think that’s love.”
Loved the end!
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thank you for reading. glad you liked it
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