LOU RASMUS

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Check It Out

i had my short story “A Bad Night with Good Friends” featured in the Manic Raven Press short story anthology Twisted. its about doing drugs and ending up where you dont want to end up. basically. id love for you to check it out and let me know what you think of it. or not, its your life.

read it on Kindle now: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B078M5JPKQ/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1514255971&sr=8-2&keywords=Twisted+volume+one

thanks to Manic Raven Press for featuring me. and thank you for putting up with this self plug.

lou rasmus

December 29, 2017

Short Stories

#creative-writing, #fiction, #Flash-Fiction, #micro-fiction, #Writer, horror, Short Story

37 responses to “Check It Out”

daffniginger

December 29, 2017 at 2:59 pm

That’s awesome! Definitely gunna check it out

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1. lou rasmus
  
  December 29, 2017 at 5:13 pm
  
  thank you. please let me know what you think!
  
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basilikepappablog

December 29, 2017 at 3:00 pm

Congratulations!

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pvcann

December 29, 2017 at 3:06 pm

Congrats, another achievement on the road of writing, more to come I’m sure.

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1. lou rasmus
  
  December 29, 2017 at 5:13 pm
  
  thank you very much. hopefully so
  
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Shantanu Baruah

December 29, 2017 at 4:54 pm

Congrats

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lou rasmus

December 29, 2017 at 5:13 pm

mucho grassyass… (i dont know spanish)

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lou rasmus

December 29, 2017 at 5:14 pm

thanks thanks!

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cariboucrossingsak

December 29, 2017 at 6:49 pm

Just downloaded…. I’ll let you know when I read it 😊

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1. lou rasmus
  
  December 30, 2017 at 2:12 am
  
  thank you so much.. please do 😊
  
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  1. cariboucrossingsak
    
    December 30, 2017 at 9:29 am
    
    I really liked your story, Lou. Perhaps it was the reader’s footsteps you also heard in the brush! Well-written.
    
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  2. lou rasmus
    
    December 30, 2017 at 12:13 pm
    
    maybe! … but thank you for taking the time to read it. i really appreciate your support and feedback
    
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ortensia72

December 29, 2017 at 7:36 pm

Congratulations that is fantastic.ill sure check it out😀🎉

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1. lou rasmus
  
  December 30, 2017 at 2:13 am
  
  that would be great. let me know what you think of it
  
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stripSearchLA

December 29, 2017 at 10:57 pm

Congrats! This is a great achievement.

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lou rasmus

December 30, 2017 at 2:13 am

thank you

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S_MW

December 30, 2017 at 3:19 am

This subject matter really interests me. Is it available on Amazon UK, do you know? I’ll download it asap (bit skint for the next few days).

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1. lou rasmus
  
  December 30, 2017 at 4:12 am
  
  cool.. and ya, its on Amazon UK. let me know what you think of it!
  
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  1. S_MW
    
    December 30, 2017 at 9:35 am
    
    Great! Will do, Lou. I do love the way you write.
    
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  2. lou rasmus
    
    December 30, 2017 at 12:13 pm
    
    that is very kind. thank you
    
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MyHomeIsWriting

December 30, 2017 at 3:34 am

Congrats

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1. lou rasmus
  
  December 30, 2017 at 4:13 am
  
  thank you
  
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Thankful Widow and Daughters

December 30, 2017 at 8:09 am

Just read it! Sounds like an interesting evening with friends! Well written and congratulations. Always look forward to your writing!:)

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1. lou rasmus
  
  December 30, 2017 at 12:11 pm
  
  thank you very much, that really means a lot.
  
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Thankful Widow and Daughters

December 30, 2017 at 12:12 pm

My pleasure!:)

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George F.

December 30, 2017 at 1:16 pm

Congrats! Paid?

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1. lou rasmus
  
  December 30, 2017 at 3:54 pm
  
  not paid. but happy to have my work published
  
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  1. George F.
    
    December 30, 2017 at 3:58 pm
    
    Great accomplishment!
    
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2. lou rasmus
  
  December 30, 2017 at 3:54 pm
  
  and thank you
  
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House of Heart

December 30, 2017 at 6:23 pm

That’s great , congratulations.

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1. lou rasmus
  
  December 30, 2017 at 6:34 pm
  
  thank you very much
  
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ortensia

January 20, 2018 at 10:01 am

I just read the story.absolutely brilliant.the end:I didn’t see it comment no at all😎and crunch crunch crunch kept me jumping on my chair and created the perfect unsettling feeling.share it on instagram…..advertise 😉

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1. lou rasmus
  
  January 20, 2018 at 3:01 pm
  
  thank you very much. that means a lot to me that you bought it and read it. and im glad it had you jumping… i think that means that i did my job
  
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  1. ortensia
    
    January 20, 2018 at 3:04 pm
    
    you did indeed,but why you don’t post the cover among your poems in Instagram?it definitely worth it.have a great week end
    
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  2. lou rasmus
    
    January 20, 2018 at 3:06 pm
    
    i actually had it on Instagram for a while and then took it down after i thought people were done looking at… but you have the right idea.. thanks… and you have a good weekend too
    
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  3. ortensia
    
    January 20, 2018 at 3:08 pm
    
    I’ll share it😉
    
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  4. lou rasmus
    
    January 20, 2018 at 3:27 pm
    
    well you dont have to. but i wouldn’t be mad if you did haha. thanks again
    
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