LOU RASMUS

big book guy

Love

She’s bad for me,
Brings out the
Worst in me,
Makes me do
Horrible things…
She’s gonna
Fucking kill me.

And I wouldn’t
Want to die
Any other way.

lou rasmus

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16 responses to “Love”

  1. drainbrainx Avatar
    drainbrainx

    Fucking awesome

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    1. lourasmus Avatar
      lourasmus

      thank you

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  2. M.G. Daniel Avatar
    M.G. Daniel

    That’s the spirit my bro. If she’s too cute to pass up and the stoner sex & supply is out of this world, then what doesn’t make you stronger kills you. Or is it the other way round? Lou da best.

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    1. lourasmus Avatar
      lourasmus

      haha that’s a great comment, thank you for reading!

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      1. M.G. Daniel Avatar
        M.G. Daniel

        yeah, i know that lovely feeling, sometimes deceptive, of having a girlfriend

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  3. AlmostButNotQuiteEnough Avatar
    AlmostButNotQuiteEnough

    Ah I feel this poem way too much. Beauty 🙂

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    1. lourasmus Avatar
      lourasmus

      thank you, those are kind words

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  4. Orvillewrong Avatar
    Orvillewrong

    Straight to the point!

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    1. clarinetpassion Avatar
      clarinetpassion

      That is a very nice hat

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  5. lourasmus Avatar
    lourasmus

    ive really never been one to dance around the point … thanks for reading

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  6. clarinetpassion Avatar
    clarinetpassion

    My wife got cross because I didnt flush. She defriended me,poked me,stalked me,wrote all over my wall and even sent me a few nasty posts and texts and tweets. So I posted it on face book and got a lot of likes,freinds,tweets and pokes.

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    1. lourasmus Avatar
      lourasmus

      hahah this is one of the best comments ive ever received. thank you

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  7. Lorelai Kilmore Avatar
    Lorelai Kilmore

    Find what you love and let it kill you. Great stuff, Lou. Very Bukowski.

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    1. lourasmus Avatar
      lourasmus

      i guess i never saw this comment, but thank you for it. that is one of my favorite quotes

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  8. Basilia Eyowel Avatar
    Basilia Eyowel

    Damn! Okay I love your writing!!! 💪🏾🙌🏾

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  9. lourasmus Avatar
    lourasmus

    thank you

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