Her name was Sin, his name was Weak. It was a Friday night, one on the Thirteenth. She was out with some friends, he was out with his demons. Face them, he thought, confront Temptation and resist her. And he was doing good. That is, until Sin walked in, all pretty and pale and thin. Resist, Weak thought, resist. But he couldn’t divert his eyes. No, not from her rep lips or her delicious thighs. Her entire aura was made of desire. And Weak, oh he tried to be strong – he really really did! – but when Sin called his name, he couldn’t hold on. Eventually that night, Sin made him do wrong.
Sin & Weak
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Lou Rasmus is an independent author from Chicago, IL. His works are largely focused on exploring the meaning of life – or lack thereof – while the themes of love, relationships, and self-loathing are also central to many of his stories. His upcoming novel, Primrose Isle, will be his third self-published title. Grapefruit Juice, a collection of bitter poems and short stories, and DEAD RED FISH, his semi-autobiographical debut novel about a young man coming to age on a road trip with his childhood friends, are also available on Amazon. View more posts
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Brilliant
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This poem is exciting. She seems like my type of girl. lol
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