Fucking In The Car Is Hard

lou rasmusOctober 1, 2017October 1, 2017Poems#Erotica, #life, #poem, #poet, #poetry, #reality, #Relationships, #Sex, #Writer

We fucked in the car last night,
In the parking lot of a gas station
That didn’t have any parking lot lights.
I left the windows rolled up
And I turned off the A/C,
And then we fucked so hard that
That the air got thick and
I couldn’t really breathe.
Then I started dripping sweat onto her,
And the windows got all fogged up,
And I said, “can we please stop,
“I feel like I’m going to faint.”
“Yeah,” she said, wiping my sweat
Off her face, “I came already, anyway.”

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Lou Rasmus is an independent author from Chicago, IL. His works are largely focused on exploring the meaning of life – or lack thereof – while the themes of love, relationships, and self-loathing are also central to many of his stories. His upcoming novel, Primrose Isle, will be his third self-published title. Grapefruit Juice, a collection of bitter poems and short stories, and DEAD RED FISH, his semi-autobiographical debut novel about a young man coming to age on a road trip with his childhood friends, are also available on Amazon. View more posts

5 thoughts on “Fucking In The Car Is Hard”

M.G. Daniel says:

October 3, 2017 at 12:12 am

Ewww Lou. lol. I hear that kind of fail happens when one spends too much time in solo vs in company. LOL, but this is incisive social commentary about the times. I am still trying to figure out if your blog writing is really you in person or in persona

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1. lourasmus says:
  
  October 3, 2017 at 3:44 am
  
  maybe a little of both, but this has actually happened.
  
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  1. M.G. Daniel says:
    
    October 3, 2017 at 12:39 pm
    
    Oh, got it. Maybe you need a friend giving unconditional love and hug-a-thons sometimes v quickie car moments. I wish you some joy today (on top of pleasure) – maybe on a long random walk you will have a long lovely conversation about nothing in particular with a little old lady tending a garden of the most beautiful flowers. Or you will wander on an impulse into an ancient cathedral and inhale the imposing silence or feel the sweet music washing over you or mumble delightful feelings with whatever calls to your soul. Things like that. Have a nice day.
    
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  2. lourasmus says:
    
    October 3, 2017 at 5:01 pm
    
    thank you very much
    
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AlmostButNotQuiteEnough says:

November 15, 2017 at 10:05 am

This is so ridiculous that I love it! You’re good.

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